字数:200满分:100分
文章用词灵活多样,学术词汇使用也比较准确;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用。
How astounding two one-legged men can walk! In the picture run two handicapped men, supporting each other with steady hands towards the same direction, with their crutches left behind. The caption indicated, ”you have one leg and so do I, we can go anywhere through mutual help.” Undoubtedly, the aim of the picture is to illustrate that cooperation is of great importance in our current society. According to the report by the Chinese Academy of Social Sciences, those who are not ready to cooperate with others hardly reach a high job and survive in such a fiercely competitive situation. Why they fail to achieve a superior position in their career? The answer seems self-evident. On the one hand, you may be so excellent to competent an executive, however have difficulty in working together with your colleagues and even your boss, which perhaps cause you are forced to part with your post. On the other hand, by cooperation among each other, you will broaden your horizon and create a new idea, helping to enhance your work experience and efficiency. Based upon the analysis above, we should work harmoniously with our partner in every attempt towards our goals. In addition, it is indispensable to cultivate and promote the sense of teamwork in our kinds. Only in this way can be our society and individual develop more harmonious.