湖南衡阳市八中2013届高三5月月考试卷英语作文

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nowadays,shopping in the Internet is a most popular way in the word.Shopping in the Internet has many advantages.First,it's convenient to buy anything that you want.Second,it's quickly for you to get what you buy.Everything has two coins,there are many disadvantages in shopping in the Internet.For examble ,you may buy the overdue goods and can't get a good price.As far as I'm concerned,the government should strengthen the control.Only in this way,can we get a good Internet shopping environment!