邢台二中2012―2013学年上学期高二年级期末测试试卷英语作文

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several terrorist attacks have taken place in campus since 2010, which made people amazed. after surprise, we all lost in mind: how to strenthen the security uard of our campus? in my opinion, we school should be trict with the guard of the school gate, and keep alert 24 hours a day. when it is time to have lesson, the school gate should be closed. what's more, it is necessary to have some policemen guard the campus every now and then. thirdly, it is the education of how to protect oneself and the awareness of secrity that counts most. therefore, we all have duty to do something to our campus security.