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文章词汇表达丰富,学术词汇积累做的也很棒;能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;文章结构严谨,有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分。
Sweet and graceful, a delicious pretty American girl is dressing traditional Chinese costume, who seems gratification with costume and dances toward us. The picture vividly illustrates that the splendid culture are shared throughout the world, without any boundary. Indeed, culture, especially with the traits of the people, diffuses across the world at crazy speed defying our imagination, which primarily results from the globalization. As the nations are getting closing, and the ways of communications are getting various, our traditional culture , such as Beijing drama, tea, china, etc., has been popular with foreigners. Meanwhile, with no surprise, the exotic culture also exerts enormous influence on our life, and it can be demonstrated with movies of Hollywood as well as multinational corporations. It is significant that a variety of culture can be studied and recognized by each other, in that we are exposed to new custom and idea that can broaden our horizon, sparking our inspiration. Attention , however, should be paid. We should resist unfavorable factors decaying our soul and barely benefit to thoughts and do well in absorbing splendid culture in. Only this way can the culture share in a wonderful way.