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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8974
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

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拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。

用户练习作文:

As we know, one's worth cannot be measured by looks just as sea water cannot be measured in liters. So it is unwise to judge a person by their appearance. For example, we can not know whether a person's quality is good, and whether someone has a great capacity, and like the saying goes, you can not know how many monthly pay does he get by one eye. So, we shouldn't judge a person by their appearance. We all know Ma Yun and Yu Minghong, they are the winners in their careers, but their appearance is not very good. Some people regard their appearance as no chance to success, but they didn't give up and work hard. Today, they have became founder of their own company. It is the best instance for us, and we can see that it is unwise to judge a person by their appearance. As a result, we'd better judge a person by their character, their capacity or other aspects, but their appearance.

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