邢台二中2012―2013学年上学期高二年级期末测试试卷英语作文

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Recengtly,our contry took place some violent things and the people are shock with it ,aside from shocking ,everyone thinks into deeply:What should we do to improve school satefy . Here are some ways to improve school satefy . First of all ,everyone should improve the awareness of safely ,exprecially the students .Secondly , the teacher should care for their sthdents ,and put more love in students ,that they can study happily.Thirdly,the headmaster should set up some education about school satefy.