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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳；作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量，注意几处拼写错误。
As is known to all,there are numberous ways to get information. Howeer, with the deolopment of technology and science,network has become one of the leading method to obtain knowledge. Studying online takes an important role in our life. Two reasons give rises to this phenomonon. Firstly,when we had some troubles in studying in the past, we will enquire the teacher. but as we know, it is an quicker way to obtain the answer. At last,studying online can appeal the children than to ask teacher. Howeer, it also has bad effect to us. studing online doesn't mean that we can obtain all the information on it. on the contrary, childrens will depend on it and have a bad thought. we are supposed to teach them to build up a correct thought.
