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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文中词汇表达比较丰富，但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。
As is known to all,there are numerous ways to get information. Howeer, with the deolopment of technology and science,network has become one of the leading method to obtain knowledge. Studying online takes an important role in our life. Two reasons give rises to this phenomenon. Firstly,when we had some trouble in studying in the past, we will ask the teacher. But as we know, it is a quicker way to obtain the answer. At last,studying online can attract the children than to ask teacher. Howeer, it also has a bad effect on us. studying online doesn't mean that we can obtain all the information on it. On the contrary, childrens will depend on it and have a bad thought. we are supposed to teach them to build up a correct thought.
