2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

As is known to all, technology and science has greatly improved recently .At the same time, shopping online has become a new craze. According to a recent survey, the people who shopped online have increased 20 percents than last year. Such as the saying goes,‘every coin has two sides'. Although it is a more convenient way to buy some things we need, it also has some trouble beyond our imagination. Firstly, it is an easier method for trickster to cheat money. And then, the goods we buy can be different from the picture that the seller put on the net. As far as i an concerned, it is important for us to shopping online cautiously. we are supposed to be taught more skills about net shopping.