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经常跟父母发火,甚至几天不讲话要求:
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Frist,i want to ask every parents that do you knowthanks for your sons or daughters.You may think we are too young to rebel against their parents.But i think parents sometimes care for their children instead of their children if happy. Yesterday i saw a father having a fight with his son in person.I want to ask the father do you love your son?All in all.I want to tell every parents if you love your son please don't make they unhappy.