拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错;请注意分段。
Now,it is a phenomenon that a wealth of information makes us can't pay attention to one thing.Simply,we just read much information in the newspaper in addition to our interests.However,we will forget information which we have read in newspaper after a period of time.Little can be learn after we reading newspaper.The underlying cause is information explosion.Much information will affect our attention and make us can't remember these information. Therefore,what we should learn is we must take actions to avoid being distracted by irrelevant information.Fisrt,we need to know which type of information we are interested in.Second,we can find the information in the newspaper which we are interesting in.Finally,not only we should read the information carefully but also thinking is necessary.We will find that we can learn much knowledge in the newspaper if we act like this.