- 分享到:
作者学术词汇积累做的很棒，但总体词汇丰富度要加强；可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用；文章层次较为清晰；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用。
The social as well as our entire humanbeings is developing at an astounding rate, while the environment is getting worse and worse. It is undeniable that it is our behaviours that affect the surrounding environment. It is time that we need take some actions to deal with this circumstance. The situation we are confronting is horrible. The contaminated lakes lead to less available water resources, the toxic air causes various chronic illnesses even the pollutant lands produce unedible grains. Since that some negative point of views suggest that it is too late to take steps to compensate what we have done.
