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The social as well as our entire humanbeings is developing at an astounding rate, while the environment is getting worse and worse. It is undeniable that it is our behaviours that affect the surrounding environment. It is time that we need take some actions to deal with this circumstance. The situation we are confronting with is horrible. The contaminated lakes lead to less available water resources, the toxic air causes various chronic illnesses, in addition, the pollutant lands produce inedible grains. Since that some negative points of view suggest that it is too late to take steps to compensate what we have done. Those people indicate that the influence is perpetuate which will not only do harm to us but also the generation behind us.
