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The social as well as our entire human beings is developing at an astounding rate, while the environment is getting worse and worse. It is undeniable that it is our behaviors that affect the creatures such as plants and wild animals. Therefore, it is time that we need take some actions to deal with this controversial circumstance. The situation we are confronting with is horrible. The contaminated lakes lead to less available water resources for animals including humans and animals, the toxic air causes various chronic illnesses, in addition, the pollutant lands produce inedible grains. Since that some negative points of view suggest that it is too late to take steps to compensate what we have done. Those people indicate that the influence is perpetuating which will not only do harm to us but also the generation behind us. On the contrary, there exits another group of people who takes positive attitude towards it, who assume that It is never too late to act with our living condition as long as people embark on cutting out those immoral habits. For instance, from then on, people should use private cars less than before to reduce the carbon dioxide emission. What’s more, the government is supposed to play an important role to supervise manufactures, implement laws to fine even shut down those factories which ignore the legislation. As far as I’m concerned, it is our responsibility to respond to such a catastrophe of sustainable development of plants and animals. Only we realized the vitality of plants and animals to us, do we take them into our consideration and protect them from vanishing.
