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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12903
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;能较灵活地使用部分学术词汇,有基础拼写错误,需要注意一下;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

As is known to all , there are numerous ways to communicate and contact with others. Meanwhile, with the development of society,communication online has become a new craze . Electronic communication has gradually replaced face-to-face contact. Two reasons give rises to this phenomenon. On the one hand, it is a more convienient method than face-to-face chatting. After all, everyone has their own matters to do so that they have not enough time to meet.on the other hand, face- to-face contact means that we have spare time at the same time. it is so hard for the people who is working to finish. As far as i am concerned, although electronic communication saves more time, it is better to link face to face. Especially, it is satisfy for parents to meet their children face to face

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