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2011年考研英语作文真题:旅程之“余”

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要求:
题目 看图作文:旅程之“余”(题目自拟)
说明 Write an essay of 160---200 words based on the following drawing
要求
1.Describe the drawing briefly
2.Explain its intended meaning

3.Give your comments

用户的作文(系统评分83.5分
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作者词汇基础扎实,拼写也很棒;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;全文结构较为严谨。

用户练习作文:

Described vividly in the picture is a sight-seeing boat ,with twin tourist and a boatman on it. And amounts of rubbish, however, flowing onto the water comes there by the throwing of sight-seers. At the lower part of it we can see several chinese characters which reads:”a trail of rubbish behind touring ”. No surprisingly, the drawer of the picture intends convey more instructive meanings. Indeed, the irritated phenomenon is not isolated. A good case coming in my mind is the actions concerning aggressive destroyed environment by chinese tourists around world. Moreover, with the emergency of such news ,people have to ponder why we are of that less awareness of environment-protecting? Undoubtedly, effective measures should be encouraged lest similar happenings go unchallenged. And, from my personal perspective, the education can play a critical element in insisting that the well-meaning environmentally-friendly initiatives translate into better promotion. Despite the authority has tried to curb people’s negative activities by developing new billing codes, i also agree,the lasting change can only be effected by the general public themselves.

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