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Nowadays most of the people who live in the big city have become been more and more interested in shopping online. As my opinion, the advantage of shopping online is very environment, that is useful for the people who do not have free time shopping. And you have a choice the same product from various shops. On the other hand, you can buy some unusual stuff which is you never see it. That is amazing. Some people are willing to shop online because they find most of the stuff is cheaper than shops. But one of my friends have told me that you could not tell whether it is genuine articles. And it is hard to return to the stop if you do not like the stuff from it. To sum up, I prefer to shop online. You will have a nice shopping if you have some experiences to buy online.
