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A problem we always face is that we just think our life is not so happy as our plan.When you face a problem you can't deal with,you may feel sad and start to complain.For example,your boss may assign you a task which is hard and tedious.You may feel stressed and angry. I think you just lack of the ability to deal with the problem and be happy.When we have the problem in the task,we just need to calm down.What we should know is task can't be solved if we deal with it without hesitation.Besides,we need pay too much attention on the problem which we can't deal with.Something is so perfect that we need have time to share it.For example,our parents can prepare delicious food for you.And you can play games with you friends and they can help you friendly when you tell them your problem.Therefore,we need to get the ability to solve problems and be happy.
