题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
作者句法基本功不错,可适当增加从句的使用;作者能较灵活地使用学术词汇,要仔细避免拼写错误;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。
Nowadays, with the development of technology and science , more and more people tend to use computer to communicating in friends-making network , studying hot teaching video or shopping on some popular shopping Web site. And from this phenomenon,it's not difficult for us to find out the intimate ralationship between computer and human. It is well known that the computers, which is created by human beings in several decades ,has been using sufficiently in this years. people gain great convinience in computer from all over the daily life. for one thing, they changed their lifestyle by surfing on the net to communicate with friends more cheap and more convenience, learn different spicious of knowledges easily and less costly. for another thing, by efficiently useing comouter , our human beings can save more time and to do more things that we want. in a word , computer take a important role in human's society and we can't imagine what the world would be like without computer some day.