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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；作者学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间，词汇表达灵活性也要提高，单词拼写错误较多；请注意分段。
Electronic communication has been very popular because of the popularity of Internet and there is no doubt that it can bring some impacts on people.On the one hand,account of its presence,communication becomes very convenient and fast .Besides,people can communicate with each other whatever time and place.On the other hand,bad impacts can't be avoided.It is obvious that people lack of face-to-face contact due to it. As far as i am concerned,electronic commuincation can't take the place of face-to-face contact.To begin with,face-to-face contact is a breif way of commuincation,which is benificial to parents and children to know each other's meaning as soon as possible.At the same time,face-to-face contact can promote the reletionship of parents and children.Next,electronic commuincation ,which reduce the exchange of emotion,can increase the loneliness which can raise the possibility of disase.Last but not least,face-to-face contact is a basic way to communicate and we shouldn't abandon it.
