2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

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As is illustrated in the picture,people are accustomed to using mobile phone in their lives. They use it even when they are crossing the road.What is revealed in this picture is that mobile phone to people,especially young people ,is water to them. There is no doubt that the absence of mobile phone bring great convenience of people's lives.However,It is obvious that overusing phone can bring about serious consequence such as collision,fall even accident.In addition,disease and cancer can be caused,which could be at the cost of money and health.What's more,overusing mobile phone reduce the contact of face to face,posing a threat to their lives. All in all,while we benefit a lot from mobile phone,we should remain rational thinking.