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Living in the valuable life As the saying goes, "The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it." reveal that the essensense of life which is of benefit society and can improve our instinct. First and foremost, as some respectical scientist who invent light, electric, telegraph and aircraft, etc, deserved their whole life in which the matter impact and change our lifestyle. From this facet, they achieved their goals, and acomplished the mission which god accord to them. what's more, even if the common person who have inner value should perform their best effort to glory the competence which they have handled. Last but not least, a valuable life can fill one's life and to be chaming. In conclusion, as the soldier Xu san duo said a alive person must do meaningful thing. so to be a current college student, I will endeavor myself.
