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【精析】
这是一份简历。和求职信类似，简历一般包括个人情况，教育背景，个人能力，目标职业等信息。在写简历时，一定要实事求是，不可夸大其词，要特别注意突出自己符合招聘信息的能力。另外，还要注意简历的格式和语言，格式要整齐明了，语言要简洁有力。
可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用；过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富，层次欠清晰；文中词汇表达较为丰富准确，但存在单词拼写错误。
Dear employers： my name is liming，a sunshine boy。 at fiftheen july in 1986 ，coming to the world。Nowadys，i am not my wife。in june 2008， i’m gratuded from English in north college。 during studying，my all of subjests are wonderful。there is a great ability of speaking、listening and writing on me。meanwhile，the second language is Geman for me，i am good at speaking about Geman。what’s more，i am silimal to process of foreign trade。 In my life，i like to play basketball and to sing song，watching film is my often do。I want to work as a foreign trade clerk in your company。
