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If you meet someone need you help,what could you answer?I guess you can answer the"yes"in time.but sometime,we should learn to say "No". somebody never say"no",maybe have list reason.first,its hard to reject others,even the goodfriend.second,they cannot found some reject reason. If you in busy,and cannot reject someone request ,eventually can make yourseif tired.so,we can learn to say "no",when meet some request.