2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；文中的句子基本没有错误，可适当将文中短句合并为长句；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

As an old saying goes, one can not judge a people by his appearance, so do things. It's unwise to draw a conclusion as soon as seeing one thing. There's a word from Confucius, thinking thrice before doing it. It means people should have a further understanding before draw a conclusion. Take children as an example, when their father spanks them, they are more likely to consider that their parent dislikes them. However, when they grow up, they have a thoughtful mind to understand their parents, whose incentive is to correct their mistakes. This is about a naive thinking, which only depends on the appearance and a mature thinking which can make a further understanding. Don't believe what you see, don't believe what you hear, they are all easy to be tricks. It's more advisable make a judgement by your mind.