2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；文中的句子基本没有错误，可适当将文中短句合并为长句；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

As an old saying goes, one can not judge a person by his appearance, so do things. It's unwise to draw a conclusion as soon as seeing one thing. There's a word from Confucius, thinking thrice before doing it. It means people should have a further understanding before draw a conclusion. Take children's behavior as an example, when their father spanks them, they are more likely to consider that their parent dislikes them. However, when they grow up, they have a thoughtful mind to understand their parents, whose incentive is to correct their mistakes. This instance is about a naive thinking, which only depends on the appearance and a mature thinking which can make a further understanding for people's inner feeling. Don't believe what you see and don't believe what you hear for they are all easy to be tricks. What's most advisable is to make a judgement by your mind.