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We all know that "The meaning of life is not how long it is, but how wide it is". That is what important is how to use our life, not how many times we have. So we should make full use of our life to do something significant. As far as I am concerned, we should try our best to learn knowledges, whatever the knowledge about. We can read good books or listen to lectures, we also can study through many other ways. In a word, don't stop studying. Benjamin Franklin, an American president, he hadn't go to school ever, but he insisted on learning, when he was old, he can spoke six languages. While he was the president, he led Americans passed the economic crisis, left a deep impression to his people. So, regardless of whether we do some great event, do we need study continous. To be a well-read people is my target. And I will do it try my best, for I believe it will make my life more meaningful. And what do think of it?
