文中单词拼写做的很棒,再多积累些词汇就更好了;简单句比重过高,另应加强复杂句的练习;层次欠清晰,衔接成分很少。
Robot Ladies and gentlemen, thank you for attending our company’s news conference. As you know, there are some question when you go to work. Who is going to take care your aged parents? Who is going to cook? Who is going to talk with them? That is an important question. Our company will solve these problems. A robot of our company will take care your parents. It will have a cook for your parents. The robot can do anything. It can make the bed and dust the dress tableIt. And it will play chess and do exercise with them. When the aged parents have a cold, the robot will call the doctor. So you must buy a robot for your aged parents. This is very good advice.
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