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In the modern world,online-shopping has been became more and more popular and it even became a fashionable ways.More importantly is that when we are shopping online we can have so many kinds of goods to be choosed by us.Furthermore,we can cost less money to go shopping in internet as well as can more convenient for we just need use our fingers to pressing code we can get we want it. But on the contrary,choosing online-shopping cann't acomplish everything that we want.such as,ice cream,cars and so on.What's more,we look something online always have a lot of difference for our recieve goods. For this we see,online-shopping has it's advanges and disadvantages. We need to learn what is we real needed and then choose correct methods to buy things. Therefore,we can get a happy experience of going shopping.
