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假设你是某公司销售助理王海，请给David Smith先生写一封回信，内容包括：
1感谢对方订购100箱衬衫；
2建议用纸箱而不用木箱装运，并列举纸箱的优点；你公司最近与别的美国公司交易中也用过纸箱，效果很好；
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Dear David Smith
作者词汇量偏少，但单词拼写做的不错；全文结构较为严谨；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意个别句子错误；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。
Dear David Smith, First of all, I'll thank you for you ordering 100 boxes of shirts. I suggest that the shirts should be packed with paper box instead of wooden box. Recently, paper box has been used in a deal with an american cooperation, which was a good result. I hope that you can reply quickly. Yours Sincerely, Wang Hai
