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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
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Dear Sir or Madam, I know your new product of No. 5670 during the exhibiton held in New York on the date of Dec.15th to 22rid and I was quite interested in it . Please send us a price list and instruction. Thanks for your attention an we are ecpectiing to establish business relationship with you. We are looking forward to your early reply! Yours sincerely, Hu Bin.
