小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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my friend lily is a beautiful girl who has long hair and big black eyes. she studys very hard, and always wakes up early. she usually helps others to do their housework. she is taller than me. she likes apple, banana,pear very much. she has a little dog, she always plays with it.