单词拼写做的不错,文中词汇表达贫乏;可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用;上下文衔接稍显不流畅。
It is not sensible to make a conclusion once we see or hear something. Making a conclusion regarding anything is not a seemly thing. It needs to observe the concrete things or people for a while and deep thinking regarding also needed, because it is rash to make a conclusion when we do not understand the concrete thing or people. The first looking for the thing or people or the first hearing about that, we even can not recognize what it is. How could we make a conclusion about it?
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