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字数：300 满分：100分
语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；有效地采用了一些简单的从句为文章增色；作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇，建议要多使用学术词汇；请注意分段。
thrift is good traditional habit According the requests the composition demand, i think it is a very good habit to be careful with money.why?because first of all ,money is hard to earn,especially for those who have not the high school degree or dont have the ability to earn enough money.in the real and creul world,if you have not money,you will have difficulty in doing most of things,so we must be careful with the precious money,we must cherish them ,cherish the value we make ,cherish the efforts we make .Scecondly,we must save up money in case of sudden events for future ,maybe you will face a lot of troubles or issues that need a lot of money.Once you have enough money in hand,you may not afraid of the sudden things you probably face.At last,for us students,we should develop good habit on spending money,just buy what we need.
