作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用;请注意分段。
This is an age that various thoughts contend, which emerged more new conclusions. In this case, some people may be puzzled, while some may act and say something as others'. Exactly, it's unadvisable to give a comment or conclusion rightly after one's seeing and listening without thinking any more. So what should we do to be wisdom in behaving?There may be the following suggestions for your reference. To start with, you ought to get the awareness and perform the habit to think independently. Secondly, exchange your idea with others, listening,thinking and writing down what others superior to and what you can learn from. Here, pay attention that never just bring what you learn into your life or do as others identically. You need think your own characters and find the best way, in according to others' words and deeds.
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