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3、提示词：hope; organize; interestingDear Headmaster,
文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构。
Firstly, I think the environment of our school should be improved. It seems to be better if we plant more trees on campus. There isn't any flowers in the flowerbed. Beautiful flowers can delight the people passing them. So let's sow the seeds in the next spring. Secondly, we hope that the playground can be expanded. Now we have only one basketball court. That's not enough for a school with more than 1000 students. Can we have a football court and another basketball court? That will be better, if the court is indoor. Thirdly, we need activity curriculums to rich our lives at school, for example, dance, paint, music and so on. I believe our school must be better and better, and we always enjoy our school life and thank our teachers for their helps.
