小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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One of my best friends is lily. She has bright eyes and long black hair, and always wears a long white skirt when in summer. she is taller than I. she studys very hard and also gets a good result. she's hobby is dancning. On sunday, she always go to school to dance.