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Playing football is my favorite. I fell in love with it by chance. One day, I found a football on my way home. I was so curious about the little round ball that I began to play it with my friends. From then on, football became part of my life. I often play football with my classmates after class. We often train ourselves, and sometimes we compete in football games in order to improve our skills. Among all the football stars, I admire Beckham most. It is not his handsome appearance but his skills that impress me a lot.My greatest dream is to become a professional football player in the future. Playing football is my favorite. I fell in love with it by chance. One day, I found a football on my way home. I was so curious about the little round ball that I began to pay it with my friends. From then on, football became part of my life. I often play football with my classmates after class. We often trian ourselves, and sometimes we compete in football gams in order to improve our skills. Among all the football stars, I admire Beckham most. It is not his handsome appearance but his skills that imparess me a lot. My greatest dream is to become a professional football player in the future.
