2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；作者词汇表达比较多样，也能较好的使用一些学术词汇；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用；请注意分段。

The way to success is not so easy that you must work hard and never give up.What we will face is many setbacks in the way of success.Therefore,here is some advices for you. First,we must make sure that the dream you are working for is your choice.And the success can give you power to make you feel passionate.Second,you may spend most of your time in it.However,you can't ignore other things like family or friends.These things can give your help when you are in troble.Finally,many setbacks which you may run into can hinder your process for success.These setback may be difficult and complexed.Sad as you are,you can't give up.What you must know is that success is not so easy to achieve.Besides,success becomes more meaningful beacuse of setbacks.