小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have got a good friend.Her name is Lili,She is a pretty girl.She is from Korea.Lili has got long,black hair and two big eyes.She is very thin and tall.She wants to be a teacher,becuse the teacher can teach studens.Lili is nice and helpful.I like her so much,she is my good friend.