2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用；文中用词稍显贫乏，单词拼写方面也要加强；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

as the saying goes that "what you see and listen personally is not the truth" it's not wise to get conclusion by what you see and listen. in our life there are many illusion.if we believe it,we will never know the truth.when something happened we should use our mind to descover the essence of the things.