2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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welcome you to visit my hometown Jiangshan,which is a small city located at the west of Zhejiang province.Orally speaking,Jiangshan is famous for a scenery called Jianglangshan,you can see three big stones stand there,it's amazing.Also Jiangshan is famous for delicious ZheJiang style food,fish and Jiangshan cake is the name card among the best delicious.For the scenery and delicious food i will guide you to enjoy it.I hope you will have a good time here.