2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

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Be more There are many of us showed our emtion,even made a conculution,imidiaitly while seeing or hearing about smoething.But there are something wrong with it. First of all,we cannot learn all about that thing ,only know it from the first sight.If we make a conculution ,it may So,it is not smart to make a decision once you have seen or heared about something.