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the botanical garden植物园
【高频词句】
assemble集合
enter name报名
left baggage office行李寄存处
1．According to the schedule，the touring will include…根据计划安排，旅行路线是…
2．Please be on time．请务必准时。
3．You call leave your baggage in the left．可将行李放在寄存处。
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Notice Date: December 25th, 2008 According to a plan, the college freshmen will have a autumn outing on the 27th of December. On that morning, students will visit the botanical garden and watch the exposition of human and nature. After that, we will visit the Summer Palace where we will spend the whole afternoon. You should assemble at the college gate 7 o'clock on December 27th. Those who want to take part in the excursion should enter your names at the student's union. What's more, according to the schedule, please bring launch with you. You can leave your baggage in the left. Please be on time. the Student's Union
