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It is unwise to have a conclusion when you have seen or listened immeatly.Because you really do not know whether this thing is right,and you may make a wrong conclusion. When it comes to a teacher,who only hear from his friends and tell his students.What he had told his students is wrong,and it is disadvantageous for the students.
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