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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:11浏览次数:10396
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题目:It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.把全部鸡蛋放到一个篮子里是不明智的。
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Why is it unwise to put all eggs in one basket? Because you will break all eggs since you drop the basket accidentally, which will make you pay the bill without return. In financial area, when people are going to use their money on investment, their money will take the same risk as the project if their funds are put on the same project. However, when investing on more than two projects, the total venture will be dispersed to several projects, and the investor can get a predictable minimum margins instead of the uncertain project. What the benefit people can get is the disperse investment from a balance from the minimum venture and the maximum profit. The purpose why I bring out the instance above is to give a suggestion about making a more advisable decision when choosing a combination.

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