可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用;缺少组织,上下文衔接稍显不流畅;作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量,注意几处拼写错误;可以适当增加副词的使用;请注意分段。
It's not wise to make a quick conclusion just after have heard or saw something.As people know,our ears and eyes can cheat us by an unentire story.We could misunderstand the truth if the conculusion was made based on what we had heard or saw. I think it appropriate to research and investgate before making decisions and conclusions which makes us wiser.
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