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From: wanghaiyang@hotmail.com Date: December 23rd, 2008 To: sales-department@hotmail.com Dear Mr. Johnson, We received 3,000 products of your company on December 22nd. However, according to our signing of the No. 35 order, the number of products should be 3,500. The other 500 are not received so far. Please check your product list. We are looking forward to your early reply. Yours faithfully, Wang Haiyang