2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(31):助人为乐

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In my opinion ,it is a really good habit to help others,because it can make both you and the other people happy. One day ,I was walking along the street when an old woman asked me for help,she said :"could you please dime a faver?I want to go back to home but I can't."I said :"Yes!"immediately.