2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(31):助人为乐

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My experience of helping others Last Tuesday,I went shopping to buy some snacks. On my way there, I noticed an old lady with a big bag crossing the road.And It seemed she has great difficulty taking it.So I helped her. After accepting my help,she thought highly of me,which made me feel great happy.And I decided to help others more often.